Friday, October 6, 2017

Drifting Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lazy little new-born bluebird
Drifting through a cloud unheard
Sort of like the thoughts I've had
to wake our weary world.
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Paul Amrod
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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2017

Lazy little new-born bluebird is drifting through a cloud unheard. You will sing a pretty song from where we've been. Little tiny happy baby feels the comfort of his lady. Brilliant perception is brought up in imagery of this excellently penned poem. This is really interesting and imagination is perfect...10

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Paul Amrod 18 October 2017

This piece was originally of nice slow piece for voice and piano. Much of my poetry has come from my earlier days. Thanks you so much, Greetings, Paul

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