Wednesday, March 27, 2013

Drifting Comments

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And the pain,
Of the rain,
That in vain,
Floods my heart,
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Sandra Feldman
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Lyn Pendleton 27 March 2013

Hi Sandra, it has some beautiful lines, beaches crowded with seagulls can be horribly lonely places. The last few lines capture that well. Lyn

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Gajanan Mishra 27 March 2013

love and dreams are only here in this earth. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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