Drifting Comments

Yes, I see the shades of Emily in this. It works very well. It has that certain deepness that one feels clutching them, if they should skim over the words too quickly. And yes, so smooth!

Ahh to drift upon a cloud to sail along the sky to float weightless and free I dream that I could fly..... Superbly dreamy poem........ you had me there with you Ruthy: -)

I love this poem. I know that feeling, and I feel it could not have been worded better. Beautiful

Paige: I love the rythm of your poems and the smooth flow. You can publish your own works as I did See my book 'Poems from the Heart' on amazon.com or barnesandnoble.com Good Luck and good writing. Lynn B. Glover

Thats cute - worth a 10