Thursday, August 4, 2011

Drifter Comments

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Oh, thee! Ahead lies my stresses, scattered
Around it adrifted tattered
Bounded by fears that hath
Drizzled amidst the dreamt paths
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Alfa K.A
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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 May 2020

On your vision you see some weep and this poem makes us very emotional. Dreams are associated with hopes. Having life's breath on such dreams is amazing. This poem is very brilliantly penned.

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 November 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Alfa. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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