Drifted Away... Comments
I wanted to give her a sky,
She opted for just pieces of cloud,
Some patches of soft, white cloud,
In the azure sky. When given, she hid
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Thank you so much, @Savita Tyagi. Much inspired by your appreciation.
Some reader has just rated this poem 1/10. No comment on his judgement. He is the 3rd reader to rate this poem.
people who choose to drift away from our lives are indeed like passing clouds when we think about them often times...........short n sweet
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8/2/2025 9:58:07 AM # 1.0.0
This poem has a very unique set up. I like the way it flows and the first line is a real attention grabber. It's a very romantic piece.
Thanks for appreciating the poem, particularly the first line, which you said 'is a real attention grabber'. Much inspired by your kind and appreciative words, @Sky Welch.