Your smile,
Brightened up the saddest of days,
Your love missed in many ways,
Your laughter's a distant echo now,
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A very touching write. Full of love and sadness it flows beautifully. Nice share.
The deep love, Many had wished they had, had. So sad but so well written and felt, reaches the heart.
How sad is sad. This heartfelt poem, Reflects so well, The deep love,
The great depth of sadness is so very well conveyed in your poem, Jayne. The progression from smilinglaughinggrieving is so heartfelt and very stirring to the reader.