Tuesday, October 4, 2022

Drift Away Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your smile,
Brightened up the saddest of days,
Your love missed in many ways,
Your laughter's a distant echo now,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Richard Wlodarski 06 October 2022

The great depth of sadness is so very well conveyed in your poem, Jayne. The progression from smilinglaughinggrieving is so heartfelt and very stirring to the reader.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 06 October 2022

BRAVO! ! ! ! ! ! ! jAYNE

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Jayne Louise Davies 05 October 2022

Thanks all for your kind comments. Much appreciated x

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Leria Hawkins 05 October 2022

Lovely, lovely poem, so tender....I loved it.

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 October 2022

A very touching write. Full of love and sadness it flows beautifully. Nice share.

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Sandra Feldman 04 October 2022

The deep love, Many had wished they had, had. So sad but so well written and felt, reaches the heart.

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Sandra Feldman 04 October 2022

How sad is sad. This heartfelt poem, Reflects so well, The deep love,

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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