Drift Comments

Lift the pole Let the boat drift Listen to the wind As it rustles in the leaves And remember home. You are very much poetic dear poetess. tony

the title caught me on this one too, suzanne. some of what you say here reminds me of my poems " sunning" and " sabbath reverie." i wonder about getting back to where we felt nothing but potential, but i know we can claim what's now and follows as new starting places. in letting go, in shedding, we can begin again—which is probably mainly what you're getting at, yes? -glen

Really Love the way you write, you have a way that touches peoples heart! Another wonderful poem! ! !

a philosophical overtone pervades through out the whole poem, well composed, you are a great poet and you write well, thanks for sharing

Spirituality is touching and meaningful. Enjoyed the thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.