Drift Comments

Beautiful ending.

An utterly charming poem Daniel, as light, as embraceable, as surprise itself. The ambiguity of the last line is simply beautiful and I am completely lost in the anticipation of my own awakening.

I like how you personify surprise. Making it embraceable, weightless, and something that watches over Alice Walker. That's an interesting idea to me. Great job! -SOH

A life without surprises will be very bland...... Life becomes spicy with surprises.....! Human ingenuity exceeds limits.... Stretch the imagination to greater and greater lengths and the outcome will definitely surprise you! Yes, let us make surprise an everyday companion!