Monday, August 24, 2015

Dress Up Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was wrapped in silk, painted with red lips, my hair put up to show off my beautiful-ness.

Only I felt like I was covered in filth, that my clothes were torn and ripped, my hair combed using only fingertips.
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Jeri Martindale
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Aranthabailu Ummar 28 August 2015

Hi how are you May peace & blessings of allah with you I do not know or heard the word dress up play but now I can imagine it. Your silent tears is touching my heart As it is a nostalgic song it covers the messages more than we think You gave us a good piece of your talent and feelings Oftenly I will read your poems. Because I can see you through it

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Kelly Kurt 26 August 2015

A sad poem, Jeri. But a lesson learned Peace

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 August 2015

Through silent tears thoughts in mind dresses up. Wonderful expression shared.

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Jeri Martindale

Jeri Martindale

ElDorado, AR
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