Sunday, June 14, 2009

Dress Code (Senryu) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Draconian dress codes
Deny college girls their rights
and protect the villains
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Sandra Martyres
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a meaningful poem well done

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Jaleel Perinjanam 27 June 2009

Keep the Cow fully covered to control the Bulls. The Bulls are dominating.. Sandra, keep writing......

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Naidz Ladia 24 June 2009

nice information..well penned..naizz

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Indira Renganathan 23 June 2009

Well said for the modern girls to safeguard and self guard...10+++++++++

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 21 June 2009

truth shins from the style you made. shan

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Anjali Sinha 20 June 2009

yeh draconian to some but for some its a pleasure just to dictate--- good write

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Sathyanarayana M V S 19 June 2009

Very good Sandra. Right point.

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Lynda Robson 19 June 2009

You have put your point across well Sandra, I agree, 10 Lynda xx

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Indira Babbellapati 16 June 2009

that's a cool slap! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Ashraful Musaddeq 15 June 2009

Marvelous write 10+

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a neat one sandra........10

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Mamta Agarwal 15 June 2009

interesting - society has always tried to suppress women. this moral police you rightly point out protects the villians.10 Mamta

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Lalitha iyer 15 June 2009

When there are mad men save yourself either by barring them or keep distance so that they may not harm.........likewise, , , , , , , , when you dress in a way that incites other people's animal instincts, finally it is you who is endangered.......so, it is wise to be precautionary, when the government is ineffective to protect.........Government itself accepts that it is ineffective and hence take care..........For outside readers Dress Code prohibits girls from wearing dresses revealing our tempting body.

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Catrina Heart 15 June 2009

Fine haiku written...just wondering what dress code that was.....Thanks for the great read...somewhat different to your other haikus written...10+++

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Rakesh Bedi 15 June 2009

Yeah, projecting the Truth, good!

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rago rago 15 June 2009

beautiful and let they protected............

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