Tuesday, September 5, 2006

Dreary Dressed Comments

Rating: 5.0

DREARY dressed in a blue storm,
broken twiggs break, and all the
ghost, run and run.
BARGAINS full of lonlyness, and
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Ruby Root 05 September 2006

Wow David, This poem is a little on the dark side. I guess during a storm things can seem dreary. Good imagery and Good Write. Very unique David.

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Duncan Wyllie 05 September 2006

Very strong atmosphere in this one Thankyou for sharing your art Love duncan X

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