Friday, February 11, 2011

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Rating: 5.0

I wish If i get an opportunity of braking all the BARRIERS.....
BARRIERS which is the only reason for the distance between us, though you standing infront of me.......
You standing infront of me, I wish you could take me on a long ride where I would have the complete FREEDOM of looking into your eyes and you understanding me......
You speaking sweet thoughts about yourself and I praising your thoughts....
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Surya . 19 March 2015

well done veena. a bol beautiful and touching poem surya.

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Surya . 18 November 2011

a great romantic piece. indeed yourcphrase 'i could look in to your eyes' are wonderful that gives a real feel to it. thanks for invite.by the way i put 10 marks but it is not loaded.any way to marks to you dear. surya

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veena yadav

veena yadav

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