Monday, October 9, 2017

Dreamy Way Comments

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Hung from weak stem this blows horn,
Wilde white flower has opened petals,
Pollens are flown as wind has blown,
In this highway tender journey is seen.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Pushpendra Patel 01 March 2019

Flower is busy. The way looks very dreamy. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 October 2017

Motion! ! Notion. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Unwritten Soul 10 October 2017

If i never looked at the picture i may still say this poem is wonderful but the image you clipped together with this poem, it just a detailed description attached and the details in your writing indeed enhance the image of this flower! .

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Nudershada Cabanes 10 October 2017

The journey of the flower is seen from the highway. A nice poem Sir Kumar

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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