Dreamy Girl Comments

Many many thanks..............Geetha.........I am humbled........

A beautiful Dreamy girl you have portrayed. Flow of poem is beautiful. Very pleasant to read. Loved reading it.

Many many thanks.......Gibson......for your valuable suggestion and I agree.....this piece needs a quiet ending and editing as well to sound fair and fitting.........I am humbled.......

Your Dreamy Girl is a lovely poem that needs to be finished. All the ideas are there but which to change, to edit, to leave out. You must decide otherwise your work is not complely finished. And that might be a shame. Best Wishes