Thursday, May 27, 2010

Dreamy Daze Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a deep purple haze,
coated in ultraviolet rays,
I am captured and caught,
deep in convalescent thought,
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Dale Mullock
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Loved the poetic flow and imagery. So alive with imagination. Got caught up in the read! ; 'D

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Carol-Anne Spalding 27 May 2010

You took my breath away! ! Absolutely beautiful! Those words are ones I could imagine my lover expressing to me. You touched me so much that I held back tears as my heartbeat increased. You move me. Thank you

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