Thursday, January 24, 2019

Dreamy Dawn's Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

A dreamy dawn has arrived
Near hand of this flying bridge,
A man walking ahead watches,
Behind coconut tree this sun,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Edward Kofi Louis 29 December 2019

Pinkness! ! Reflections. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dogma Daniman 10 February 2019

I wonder watching dawn always. Dawn gives us fresh breeze and we feel creation. This is beautiful poem sir.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 January 2019

A dreamy dawn's sun smiles like child, Early dawn and a child and the nature all around, and when you read it at early morn, ah beautiful imagery.

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Richard Wlodarski 25 January 2019

Beautiful vivid imagery. Wonderful dreamy style of writing. Liked it a lot, Kumarmani!

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M Asim Nehal 25 January 2019

Beauty of the nature well captured. Another dawn and another morning.10+++

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 24 January 2019

Sun smiling like a child in the dreamy dawn.Very beautiful.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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