As if awoken from a deep sleep;
I feel a deep liking for you
I sit and gaze at stars so blue;
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Dear Ankita, you have a rare ability to put your emotions in a picturesqe way. very nice liked it vry much. thank u for sharing.. would like to get ur comments on my poems. thank u
so soft like a breeze. this poem caresses the reader. 'As if awoken from a deep sleep; I feel a deep liking for you' loved it. thank you.
beautiful poem... feelings in nice flow.. needs more integrity..but overall its a good one..9/10..
A nice poetic imagination, Ankita. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks