Thursday, November 22, 2018

Dreamscape Comments

Rating: 4.5

There I lay in your arms
As lovers often do
Eyes locked to eyes
Tender kisses shared
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Matthew Holloway
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Carl Roussell 23 November 2018

The poem did not end the way I though it might; very creative writing.

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Matthew Holloway 24 November 2018

thank you, sometimes a dream overtakes reality in a way that is hard to believe, love often features in such dreams

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Joy Johnson 22 November 2018

To be real got to be rel well that's too bad sounds like a lost love of fantasy or possibly rejection it happens nice thought out poem

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Matthew Holloway 23 November 2018

the answer is never clear after the dream thank you for reading

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Matthew Holloway

Matthew Holloway

Cheshire, England
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