Dreamscape Comments

Great poem! A magical delight!

Another beautiful piece of writing Val. I enjoyed this one.

With such beauty of words you could easily start your own poetry school! What a marvel.

what a well-knit poem...5 stanzas of 5 lines each with a set rhyming in 2+ 3...you are a conscious artist who works on the presentation of a revealed idea...the poem speaks in a lively voice...

Transported into an ethereal world of sweet delight! ! But will it be so lovely when we wake up, as we have to grapple with the realities of broad day light?

Terrific poetry...truly inspiring.

Spectral images that dance and move but eventually evaporate as we awake to an also awakening world. Beautifully written.

Moon - suspended above- a very catchy imagination that is. LIKE IT

Another beautiful write, that feels like true delight, through yet another night! Another descriptive masterpiece! . Thank you for sharing it!

oh mam how beautiful your each word contain so beautiful meaning, when i was reading your poem i feel like living in that dream world forever it is indeed a spectacular piece of art, thank you for sharing, love payal

A fantastic poem, the dream world can be a great place, sometimes not so good. A fantastic write.

This dreamscape makes me want to sink and float and carelessly slide in a fearless fall and roll right over and face the wall ignoring red diodes untimely call.

The hazy dreamscape brightens up to 'actuality scape' as the dawn is at the door step! ! Excellent! !

Ma'am, your poems make me feel, long way to go (for me) . Learning everyday from you from others.

Dreams run away out of our control, good or upsetting, this beautiful poem is no dream, it`s very real and delightful. A lovely write.

A beauty beyond my limited ability to describe-Shakespearion in depth, concept and execution. You are aging well, with your poetry

What a beautiful story Valerie, described all so well.

I love this poem. It's so beautifully composed and inspires illustrative thought. Thank you for sharing your art: -)