Monday, June 23, 2008

Dreams Written On A Ribbon Of Pink Comments

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Dreams written on a ribbon of pink
I close my eyes and reach to the wind
Set sail balloon of mine, rise high
Take my ribbon of pink
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Eldin Durant van der Walt
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Paul Reed 26 January 2014

This reminds me of my grandson accidentally letting go of a treasured balloon at a family party, watching it rise away out of sight into the sky and then crying because he had lost something forever. Nice poem, Eldin

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Mac Adrone Adonay 26 January 2014

Dreams written in the ribbon of pink, you will reach them, do not blink. ;) Dreams fly if you aim high. Nice expressions of words. Thank you for your comment on my 'Teach me how to Paint'. I appreciate it.

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Eldin Durant van der Walt

Eldin Durant van der Walt

Johannesburg (South Africa)
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