A dream is nothing but a human conviction,
Something of which that traps and admires.
You don’t realize what you truly want with your addiction,
Until all you’ve ever wanted soon expires.
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It is a nice poem. Very dark feeling. I think you may try to work on the length of each stanza so they may match. I invite you to give feedback on my poems too.
Wonderful, and it has my name in it! ! ! Just take off the d at the end of 'Jaded'