Friday, September 11, 2015

Dreams (Tanka) Comments

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If only I could
Capture your beautiful smile
Wrap it with a bow
Put it under my pillow
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David Wood
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Valsa George 13 September 2015

Excellent Tanka! Enjoyed it thoroughly, David!

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Daniel Brick 11 September 2015

Wow! This is a love poem, pure and simple. You withdraw almost completely and let the poem lavish its attention on the beloved. She does not have to appear in the flesh, so to speak, because her presence fills the whole space of the poem.

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David Wood

David Wood

London
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London
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