The Original Tom Maxwell

The Original Tom Maxwell

East St. Louis Illinois /now in Junction city, or Belleville, Illinois
The Original Tom Maxwell
East St. Louis Illinois /now in Junction city, or Belleville, Illinois
Saturday, October 10, 2020

Dreams & Plans Comments

Rating: 4.7

When you want, something new in your life,
You must be open, to change,
You can't' just rely on others,
To follow, and rearrange.
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The Original Tom Maxwell
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Emmanuel Joseph Olumakiss 19 October 2021

Outstanding poem very educative Never sell out your soul for the excitement of one day, there are times we have to say no be proud of ourselves smile and walk away.

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Nabakishore Dash 17 October 2021

All stanzas are having substance and truth.Indeed a great insightful poem where every word is nicely selected.Top marks my dear poet.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 October 2021

Last year on the same date, most deserving Member Poem Of The Day. Hoorray! Congratulations.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 October 2021

True mesmerizing Modern Poem Of The Day, excellently captured 5 Stars fullest, accompnied by good advice of an experienced poet. Great!

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 October 2020

When you want, something new in your life, You must be open, to change, You can't' just rely on others, To follow, and rearrange. Taking the life into one's own hands and drive to become great. tony

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Khairul Ahsan 17 October 2020

I commented on this poem and rated it 5***** just a week earlier. Today I write here to congratulate the poet for the well deserved honor of having his poem selected as the 'Member Poem of the Day'! Well done, dear poet Tom Maxwell!

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 October 2020

When you want, something new in your life, You must be open, to change, ...Never sell out your soul, .........superb philosophical writings; yeah; in this life need to change inside and outside but always bad into good; for this changing no need to sell the self existence; self conscience, self knowledge, self experience; this is life; varieties colors there are; just need to dye with every color by righteously fixing the own existence; congrats for being selected this poem as POD....5****

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Bharati Nayak 17 October 2020

Never sell out your soul, For the excitement, of one day, There are times, we must say no, Be proud of ourselves, smile and walk away. - - - -A great poem! There are many facts of life we have to follow according to our age.We should never sacrifice our dignity for the sake of name or fame.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 17 October 2020

Nice poem..so lovely message. Thanks for sharing the poem.

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Kim Barney 17 October 2020

Tom, congratulations on member poem of the day! Great finish with those last two lines!

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 October 2020

FOCUS! ! ! Never sell out your soul! Never give up on your Dreams. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 17 October 2020

Good poem. To err is human. Very sound advice

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L Milton Hankins 17 October 2020

Congratulations, Tom. This is a very good poem. I particularly like the line " Be proud of ourselves, smile and walk away" at the very end. It is very encouraging to me. I always enjoy your work, so keep sharing!

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Never sell out your soul, For the excitement, of one day, There are times, we must say no, Be proud of ourselves, smile and walk away. Marvellous and meaningful. Congrats

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Varsha M 17 October 2020

This is really true sir. There should be balance of all and enjoyment of every thing just in measure. Thank-you for sharing.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 October 2020

A well composed poem of the day. Truly superb. Congrats on your featured piece.....5 stars*****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 October 2020

An insightful write. A great message so true. Liked the ultimate stanza.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 October 2020

A beautiful poem, very inspiring, the last stanza particularly! Yes, we must have dreams in our life, and we must plan deliberately to achieve those dreams. 'There are certain, moments, We have to, change & act our age, We can not return, to our childhood days, A part of our life, we have planet earth, as our stage - an excellent concept. The poem gets maximum from me,5*****.

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" Never sell out your soul, For the excitement, of one day, There are times, we must say no, Be proud of ourselves, smile and walk away." well crafted words of wisdom.

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The Original Tom Maxwell

The Original Tom Maxwell

East St. Louis Illinois /now in Junction city, or Belleville, Illinois
The Original Tom Maxwell
East St. Louis Illinois /now in Junction city, or Belleville, Illinois
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