Tuesday, May 9, 2006

Dreams Of You Comments

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Dreams of you fade away
Tell you why but I cannot say
A world that comfort then kills
More drugs in the form of pills
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Marie Joyce Negapatan 20 May 2006

Nice flow of thoughts! I could vividly imagine what you're trying to say with this poem.Keep it up! Thanks for the comment.: -)

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Mary-Elizabeth Conn 10 May 2006

Wow. I could really get in to this stuff. Great write- very thought provoking! :)

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Kee Thampi 09 May 2006

Rivers of tears they cross A person that has become lost Search for what is unknown Pressure of new poem

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