Tuesday, October 13, 2009

Dreams Of Tears Comments

Rating: 4.5

I dream about you all the time,
And I want to give you all the stars,
But that would be a crime,
I can see you, in my dreams,
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Siim Andreas Peter Saarva
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John Mcmanus 14 October 2009

This is very nicely written, I like this style of poem, well done.

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Prakash Mehra 13 October 2009

I am fond of rhyming. Perfectly decorated.

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Afzal Shauq 13 October 2009

you seem good poet and this piece is one of your rich poems..heartfelt one and quite interesting..well constructed and the verses are professionally inter linked..appreciate you 10/10

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