Listen to the laughter by the ocean
Listen - the children are rejoicing.
As though incarnate birds chirping
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You share...not only your dreams...but a passionate reality! Excellent composition.
Seems I am reading the poem of a 'seasoned poet'. I am very impressed with the analogy and the rythm of the thought. The command for the words is very appropriate. Well penned.
You invite the reader to listen and watch. As I listened and watched I could hear and see the beauty of your work unfold. This poem comes from a truly gifted poet. Karin Anderson