Saturday, August 16, 2008

Dreams Of Paradise Comments

Rating: 5.0

Listen to the laughter by the ocean
Listen - the children are rejoicing.

As though incarnate birds chirping
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T. Alfred Norman
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You invite the reader to listen and watch. As I listened and watched I could hear and see the beauty of your work unfold. This poem comes from a truly gifted poet. Karin Anderson

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James B. Earley 20 August 2008

You share...not only your dreams...but a passionate reality! Excellent composition.

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Edwin Empestan (alba) 20 August 2008

Seems I am reading the poem of a 'seasoned poet'. I am very impressed with the analogy and the rythm of the thought. The command for the words is very appropriate. Well penned.

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T. Alfred Norman

T. Alfred Norman

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