Dreams Of Life Comments

Dear Hanaaart, This poem reveals the truth of the continuous struggle in our life. Lovely composition. I invite you to read my poems and send your comments. You can try this one: Truth of Creation What will be the future Of the nation If the people keep their attention Towards only one direction If only a wheel is cared The other wheel is punctured And the chariot Of the country Will go in the dust ........................ ................... I'm waiting for your reply. Thanks!

nice poem. deep and meaningful.jolts us from our imaginations and fantasies into reality

Hi Nabil - This is a lovely evocative poem - straight from you heart. I love it and score it a MAX. In some respects life is 'A Battle of Pain' (line 10) . The SKY and the SEA are metaphors foe the extent of our imagination and our ambition. We all live on lines betwen 'Dreams and Facts' Reason and Passion' 'Existence and Negativity' which is waht makes life so interesting. This poem gives all much to think about. Love in Poetry - JOHN

Commendable wok, young lady.The piece exhibits mellifluous movement throughout...There is much to say about the theme you chose to pen on.Open upm your Minds-Eye & explore imagery & pictorial depiction.You have a solid foundation under you....that (imo) is beckoning for expoundment & creative freedom...Let loose! Also, Line 8...is that reading the way you wanted it to...looks like a wrd may be missing...Our? ? ...Overall, good work, Hana. F j R