Cast your hook into unknown oceans
Unwittingly, as an emanating aura
I'm seeing truth in ineffable notions
As concrete as steel upon my shifting mind
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I know a couple of 'masters' of poetry who would just love this poem. Your poetry is like 50 years ahead of your age.
Its lovely! I sense a somewhat fight within or trying to control something. Love the line that has before an oasis turns into a desert dune. Well written!