Monday, December 15, 2014

Dreams Of A Youth Comments

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Beauty that is lost in black holes of time,
Remains shining in the dormant stores,
Like water stored in the womb of the earth,
It touches many precious golden ores.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Edward Kofi Louis 21 December 2014

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Salini Nair 15 December 2014

sir you crafted this amazing poem with lots of variations....a lovely poem...i like each lines.... great work

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Valsa George 15 December 2014

Everyone has dreams, but it is in youth that people dream more! The world of dreams is a private territory where everyone can enter any time and have anything! No one can sue us for trespassing or poaching! You have beautifully pictured the tendency of youth to engage in romantic and exotic dreams! Enjoyed!

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Samuel Dickerson 15 December 2014

Wow! The way each stanza flowed into the next was absolutely fantastic. I also enjoyed the impressive simile in the first stanza.

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