These forsaken dreams
have yet to renew,
so, it seems
that I could've helped if I only knew.
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Bravo! Recognizing our mistakes in life is the most important decision in order to move on in search of a new horizon! This a very well penned and amazing write that shows your potential in the Poetry World! Thanks for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!
DREAMS AND DREAMS AND DREAMS! BUT IN THIS POEM DREAMS HAVE BEEN COMPARED WITH THE SHIFTING SHADOWS, I LIKE THE COMPARISON, A GOOD USE OF SIMILE AND METAPHOR, AND I LOVE THE POEM.