Sunday, March 18, 2012

Dreams Of A Life To Be Unraveled Comments

Rating: 3.9

These forsaken dreams
have yet to renew,
so, it seems
that I could've helped if I only knew.
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Daniel Warner
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Wahab Abdul 19 March 2012

DREAMS AND DREAMS AND DREAMS! BUT IN THIS POEM DREAMS HAVE BEEN COMPARED WITH THE SHIFTING SHADOWS, I LIKE THE COMPARISON, A GOOD USE OF SIMILE AND METAPHOR, AND I LOVE THE POEM.

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Romeo Della Valle 18 March 2012

Bravo! Recognizing our mistakes in life is the most important decision in order to move on in search of a new horizon! This a very well penned and amazing write that shows your potential in the Poetry World! Thanks for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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