Sunday, March 17, 2013

Dreams Of A Flower Comments

Rating: 5.0

The flower dreamt over night
Gazing at the stars
The dew inlaid her petals
With diamonds of love
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ramesh rai
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Heather Wilkins 14 June 2013

a lovely story with a sad tone. te beautiful flower should be left alone in her garden to bloom. a great metaphor

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Hazel Durham 18 March 2013

There is a moral there for us all, we could all bloom if other people didnt abuse and use us, leaving us with little self confidence. Amazing poem with beautiful imagery, loved it!

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