Saturday, August 18, 2018

Dreams, Memories And Reality Comments

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I think about you night and day
When you're not here with me
But it's impossibility
To hug only a lovely dream
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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 August 2018

I think about you night and day When you're not here with me But it's impossibility To hug only a lovely dream..........this stanza is the beginning of the poem which reflects the whole wings of poem clearly like 'morning shows the day'. Beautiful poem on love and missing.10

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Practicing Poetess 20 August 2018

Thank you, Kumar, for the lovely comment where you called my poem beautiful! :)

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Louis Rams 19 August 2018

I prefer you to continue to touch my ace, for I do not want to be replaced

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Practicing Poetess 20 August 2018

Louis, I think you & I must have 'typo fever'! My comment on a recent poem of yours contained a typo, which I wasn't able to edit. I know that you meant 'face' here, and not 'ace'! (hee hee!) Thank you for your sweet and tender comment, and I'd rather touch a face than an ace, any day!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 August 2018

A very touching and heartwarming poem. Tenderly and lovingly penned. Enjoyed reading it.10+++

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Practicing Poetess 20 August 2018

Thank you so much, Rose Marie, for your tender comment! :)

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