Dreams Lost In Water Comments

What a wonderful read! So glad I ran across this gem! Loved it.

In the dance of death god is a casuality....

a deep meaningful poem. Well done.

Hello dear beautiful poet, I love you poems keep it up. Please comment on my new poems thanks

Thank you Sulaiman and Yoonoos for your comments. One is always glad to hear that there is someone who can find a meaning in one''s thoughts committed to paper, which, as we know, is patient. I am glad that you liked it.jobztip

Deep! embedded with wisdom

Lovely imagery, well written.

I love this poem especially the title " dream lost in the water' it's a nice one

Marvelous! Imagery is so powerful! Who will look for flowers in spring-fresh hands of tiny tots.....

A beautiful sensational poem indeed. But nothing is lost in water, evaporation will cause rain again....

in the distance of death god is a causality Superb! !

Lost planets Bygone epoches Have no interposition.

No distance ever separates Dreams and desires No mirror ever dissolves Reflection and water In one's eye

acutely touched the dream in this stanza- Dreams of radiant generations Are smitten By atomic explosions Cities sink Nuclei dissipate Orbits dwindle What remains Are terra and sol In the dance of death God is a casualty. ....///// it's great poem of Poet Naseer Ahmed Nasir; love it

powerful, i must confess

Masterpiece translation you have presented for us.

Good Job! A meaningful write, Thanks for sharing

Can you help me find the poem by Derek Walcott: Frescoes of the Nee World, please

Beautiful poem.. !

A masterpiece, I suppose this should be one of your best poems. Left me speechless.....................