Dreams In Dreams Comments

Fantastic details of the dreaming imagery. Just a silent movie without the celluloid projection, projected simply by words. And the catastrophe establishes again the oft-quoted parameter...Truth is stranger than fiction. A nice piece of art. Thank you for sharing. Regards, pranab 10+

In dreams feelings are real floating in a space of memories Your face so so beautiful lighting my world inside closed eyes, I cannot control the third person I feel I am I can see myself, dreaming of dreams of you nothing else, .it is our own dream land where we feel ourselves from within..a dream withindream...beautiful write sir......10 read mine.....all dreams not come true...

A beautiful narration, Ken. Life is a dream and within it we dream, In both the dreams we smile and scream. Thanks. CP

Hey.. This is a great poem Ken.. I specially loved the note in which you end the poem. I think this one of your most moving and heart felt poem.. Emotions seems to burst out from this poem. Good.. regards Shan

With the Life of a Humble Poet, His Ego locked away in a box marked 'My Ego' Dreams and Day Dreams are the Hook to the Next series of Epic Poems in the Quest to be World Poet Laureate. You my 'Friend ' look well on that road. I enjoy the tender family Love of your dispay, and your true Faith. Thanks for sharing. Philip

marvelous and sweet way written poem..short but have a long sweet story insode..dreams are surely found in dreams..yes I agree with your plea and idea..and how you did it is impressive and meaningful..liekd it..10/10

A fine narration of a dream in a dream.

oh, this is beautiful, Ken..I love this, and I love the ending, too.

wowwwwwwww what a dream? My prayer for you 'May the Almighty make all your dreams come true' I just returned from church Our Lady of Lourdes-- had I read this earlier, I would have surely prayed for you, never mind another time surely. a tenner from me anjali

Fantastic poem... what a nice expression: I feel I am a third person! ! ! 'I touch your fingers writing in the sand, ‘I hope this love never dies’'... I hope that the fingers of DESTINY will write both your names on a Rock in the mountain of true love... a 10 surely... wael karameh karameh....

yes; Carol said it right...superb ending...thanks...10

great ken the end is wonderful 10

lovely...a very sweet end indeed...lovely to read...10

Beautifully placed lines of love...dreamy tones express your loving feeling direct to the heart my friend...a beautiful write that showcases your talent...10+++