Wednesday, November 2, 2005

Dreams In Africa Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the mouth of the wide savannah
The air of the hot midday
Casts on us a veil of stillness
Undisturbed by the remotest breeze
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Frank Bana
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Linda Ori 13 May 2006

Frank - Thanks for the trip to a very unusual place. You set the scene wonderfully - I can just see the vast expanse of the savannah, and smell the hot air and the dry grass. You bring your poem to life. Great read! Linda

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