Saturday, May 20, 2017
Dreams' Gardener Comments
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Three years almost
I see that instant
Like all others
From day one
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7/28/2025 2:42:07 AM # 1.0.0
Marilyn, I rather like this, the short lines, the plain diction, the way it moves. Lines like Maybe, it how lives our are harm the poem. You need to be careful with EVERY line and EVERY word. Every word counts in a good poem. If you'd like, check out my new webpage: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know what you think of it. YRs, JC
Thanks. Of course you are right. I am usually very careful but I also write on impulse. SO I make mistakes, which I am happy to correct. MJ