Dreams Falling Into Sewer Of Time Comments

Is there nothing that escapes your observations naseer? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

'Wafts of cologne fragrance Forming angle after angle Of lines..' Your poem is made of the imagery influenced by subconscious ways, very vivid and at the next instant vaguely dreamy pictures as I am reading it through. The architecture and emotion of your dreams is timeless, thanks for sharing with your readers, Naseer. Regards, Amary.

its fine piece. I liked the title of the peom.

I was captivated by the title and the rest of the poem didnt disappoint. Eloquently penned. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. :)

a beautiful way of writing and a poem which i enjoyed reading while seeing that poet silently watching what all around whie the thoughts passed so deep in his mind...10+++++