Monday, October 7, 2019

Dreams Every Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

every night I have dreams - 
dream about you, dream about us,
dream about the life we never had, the days which rolled away like sapphire waves ~
dream about the ethereal childhood,
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
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Susan Williams 26 October 2019

Oh! ! ! ! Now that is poetry! Original material, original presentation! 10+++++++

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 27 October 2019

Thank you, Susan! You raised my spirits and confidence with your inspiring words!

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 October 2019

Part 3 “Committed....”

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 October 2019

Part 2 But, then comes the realisation: “” some mistakes are unrepairable, There is no turning back! “”

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 October 2019

Hi Malabika, Loved this fantastic poem on love. Rather, a love of childhood. “Want to return to that dreamland, Want to savour those tiny pieces of happiness, Which seems so unattainable now, Want to fix the mistakes. “ Looking back, everybody wishes, he or she could undo the mistakes commiied and relive the life doing it right and achieve whatever was missed in REAL life. Wonderfully expressed. A 100+

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 08 October 2019

Dear Poet, Look forward and love to find your comments! True - Everybody wishes to go back and repair the mistakes in the past! I am no exception! The realization is hard to accept, though! Thank you, really appreciate your thoughtful comments and the rating!

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Chinedu Dike 07 October 2019

Very compassionate and full of passion. A beautiful love poem nicely brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing, Malabika.

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 08 October 2019

Thank you, Dear Poet! Being a poet yourself, you understand how poetry is created - takes place in the heart!

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