Dreams Do Harm Comments

great. i love this one

keep dreaming my friend..never fear it..an inquisitive and eye opening write..u amazing!

very saaaaaaad...but very nice poem...keeeeeeeeeeep writing :)

At first glance seems like a horror or psycho movie but in depth very meaningful and sad. Keep on writing.......10. Best Wishes Naseer

Very deep and sad, straight from the heart where poetry is born - 10+

it, s realy good poem i don't know what i should say... just keep writing........10

Life needs to grow and prosper....'Spock'.... Forget the dreams...Get your education sorted then.....Flourish... Nice meaningful poem...Didnt like the penknife bit though...Take care. Sid.

very meaningful, written with depth... intriguing...interesting... keep on writing...you write so well....really

nice poem friend, carry on, hope you a healthy future

pretty nice end rhymes...poignant craft...Thanks 10

Good one, keep wrting 10

go hiontach. maybe needs a little bit more expansion but it explains well the usual fight between tradition and mentality, freedom and chaos with proposed virtue.

Amazing poem! ....I love how all of the words flow into one another...sounds so lyrical.

truly sad and with deep emotion written into your words. Very well done. kimberley.