Tuesday, June 24, 2008

Dreams Die... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Angry gusty winds blow away
the sand-castle, I had once built
with sea-shells of love
and conches of care!
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Bharat Trivedi
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Tia Metcher 02 August 2008

'Hi! ', You are a wonderful poet. This really captivated my heart. Thankyou for such a beutiful poem and I hope all gets well for you. WELL DONE! Cheers :)

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Chitra - 09 July 2008

wonderful metaphor for so many dead dreams that once were alive

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 08 July 2008

An excellent imagery well composed.........

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