Dreams Can Be Glimses Of Heaven Comments
I hope their are guitars in Heaven,
a flute or two would be ok,
this is my dream of Heaven,
Like Burger King,
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'There are no politicians in Heaven' - Ah! That's a great relief to know! Politicians are pains everywhere! 'Nobody gets angry in Heaven.... there's love floating all over up there'... what a heavenly thought! I would love to be there just for that!
This is an extremely well-crafted piece. Keep writing...10/10.
Goats in heaven. You're kidding. Nice poem. I wish I could believe.
lol sure why not? Goats are fun :) Thank you for reading my poem :)
Did you mean glimpses of Heaven? I stay away from fast food restaurants, however I like your poem.
This is just one person's dream of what Heaven could be like, and would be for her. Thank you Herbert for reading my poem :)
rilly luvly poem elizabeth i like ur choice of words and all. Really nice stuff keep it up
Thank you Bobby for your kind comment and for reading my poem :) I am happy you liked it!
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7/25/2025 7:38:58 PM # 1.0.0
Loved your poem, but there are some spelling errors which can be edited by you anytime, like: 'p' is missing from the word 'Glimpses' in the title of the poem (hinted by Herbert Logerie Sr in his comment) . 'g' is missing from the word 'floating' in the 12th line.