In the sky's unwavering gaze, scattered are countless reflections;
Stars from beyond time cast a quiet smile.
On the soil of the mind, strange dreams begin to sprout;
In a mind filled only with questions, unlinked emotions begin to bloom.
I preserved your metaphysical imagery while weaving a tighter emotional rhythm. The focus flows naturally from cosmic observation to introspective blooming, a beautiful dance of outer vastness and inner complexity.
Would you like to build this into a broader poem exploring the chaos of perception or the symmetry between celestial silence and human noise? I'd love to help you shape that journey.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem