Sunday, November 2, 2008

Dreams Are Faceless Comments

Rating: 4.0

Dreams are but faceless
Eyes alone are a visible feature
And eyes indeed
Have a quaint crowd
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 March 2010

Nice poem… with cascade vibe…imageries galore and pleasant reading…thanks sharing… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Munia Khan 27 March 2010

Yes! ! Dreams are faceless and fearless as well I believe and this poem is so wonderfully depicted.....Another fantastic work from you Sir! ! !

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Rehana Nazli 03 January 2010

It's soul's sickness That draws Lines of unfamiliarity On bodies' wooden slates (Destroying their intimacy) Painting lips with a smile Doesn't sweeten the taste of sorrows. Intrigued by the above lines -the sickness of soul-one facet of soar reality of sorrows...

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Will Barber 26 December 2009

A beautiful glissando, the images shifting from one to another. The content is sad, but the artistry is undeniable.

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Fasika Ayalew 11 December 2009

it is an interesting poem. The last stanza is meaningful

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Sarwar Chowdhury 03 September 2009

excellent poetic disclosure! vivid and plurality encompassed finely! Words are signifier and they are signified connotatively and denotatively. And being not a semiotician a reader can interpret the text/discourse many ways. Plurality is a fact in the phenomena. Therefore we can say arts are really charismatic! Being beyond perception words/texts touch our mind just because of their magnetism! And yes, some discourse are more complex in comparision with sign/symbols. well done chowdhury saab! 10+

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Aijaz Asif 10 August 2009

I wonder when I start writing like you Sir, it's a very powerful write and surely added to my favs many, many 10'ssssss...... It's soul's sickness That draws Lines of unfamiliarity On bodies' wooden slates (Destroying their intimacy) Painting lips with a smile Doesn't sweeten the taste of sorrows.....bravo, bravo, bravo please accept my bows of respect rgds asif

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Linda Weischedel 20 July 2009

A very interesting poem, I enjoyed reading it.

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Josephine Dunn 08 July 2009

Very insightful - especially the third verse - '.....Painting lips with a smile Doesn't sweeten the taste of sorrows.'

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Do you know? It's wise not to wake up While sleepwalking! ...least they are broken....... very good write and eye opener too.. but poet's imagination, no one can catch..... very good write. 'All dreams not come true' canbe good reply to this poem

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Smiley Hooker 16 June 2009

I believe you, dear poet. Unfortunately, we're here now in the world of reality, where we can't choose our faces or kind of emotions, simply because we are people, alive and still feeling. Very meaningful and lovely write: -)

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 29 May 2009

ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL POEM

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 May 2009

A very nice piece of work to enhance the wayof life. Tthank you. Edward Kofi Louis.

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Absent Wryta 27 November 2008

Knowledge well imparted. What a unique piece of advice. Lovely and wise end.

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Dr Kamran Haider 03 November 2008

Do you know? It's wise not to wake up While sleepwalking! Wow... I am impressed with the way you put the vague thoughts in a wonderful flow and making it a baeautiful pieice of art... You dreams are neither faceless nor menaingless... A well penned poem...10 +++... Thanks for sharing Regards, Kamran

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Viola Grey 02 November 2008

this is quite an interesting piece...love the idea.

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