Dreams are but faceless
Eyes alone are a visible feature
And eyes indeed
Have a quaint crowd
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Yes! ! Dreams are faceless and fearless as well I believe and this poem is so wonderfully depicted.....Another fantastic work from you Sir! ! !
It's soul's sickness That draws Lines of unfamiliarity On bodies' wooden slates (Destroying their intimacy) Painting lips with a smile Doesn't sweeten the taste of sorrows. Intrigued by the above lines -the sickness of soul-one facet of soar reality of sorrows...
A beautiful glissando, the images shifting from one to another. The content is sad, but the artistry is undeniable.
excellent poetic disclosure! vivid and plurality encompassed finely! Words are signifier and they are signified connotatively and denotatively. And being not a semiotician a reader can interpret the text/discourse many ways. Plurality is a fact in the phenomena. Therefore we can say arts are really charismatic! Being beyond perception words/texts touch our mind just because of their magnetism! And yes, some discourse are more complex in comparision with sign/symbols. well done chowdhury saab! 10+
I wonder when I start writing like you Sir, it's a very powerful write and surely added to my favs many, many 10'ssssss...... It's soul's sickness That draws Lines of unfamiliarity On bodies' wooden slates (Destroying their intimacy) Painting lips with a smile Doesn't sweeten the taste of sorrows.....bravo, bravo, bravo please accept my bows of respect rgds asif
Very insightful - especially the third verse - '.....Painting lips with a smile Doesn't sweeten the taste of sorrows.'
Do you know? It's wise not to wake up While sleepwalking! ...least they are broken....... very good write and eye opener too.. but poet's imagination, no one can catch..... very good write. 'All dreams not come true' canbe good reply to this poem
I believe you, dear poet. Unfortunately, we're here now in the world of reality, where we can't choose our faces or kind of emotions, simply because we are people, alive and still feeling. Very meaningful and lovely write: -)
A very nice piece of work to enhance the wayof life. Tthank you. Edward Kofi Louis.
Knowledge well imparted. What a unique piece of advice. Lovely and wise end.
Do you know? It's wise not to wake up While sleepwalking! Wow... I am impressed with the way you put the vague thoughts in a wonderful flow and making it a baeautiful pieice of art... You dreams are neither faceless nor menaingless... A well penned poem...10 +++... Thanks for sharing Regards, Kamran
Nice poem… with cascade vibe…imageries galore and pleasant reading…thanks sharing… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK