Dreams Are All I Ever Find Comments

forms shrouded in the mist... perhaps we are dreams!

I do like the mysterious feeling flowing thru this one.

I can relate to this. I like the way you presented the message, smooth and flowing like a dream, easy to take in the meaning and relish the scene. The last line repeated from the first line is a also a great style, I like that.

Beautiful rhythm and rhyme......very nicely done Juan!