Monday, April 13, 2015

Dreams Are Alive Comments

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The excesses we made with each other,
Were washed out in twinkling of an eye,
Salt flowing from the eyes killed the germs,
How to wash the sins frozen on sky!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Ruma Chaudhuri 02 October 2015

Excellent. What a wonderful poem. Love to read it.

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Khalid Saifullah 13 April 2015

A wonderful poem.........................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 April 2015

Collective sins pollute the wind. Being hopeful and optimistic brings positive vibration of virtue to wash out pollution of sins. Dreams are still alive by such feelings. Amazing poem shared with beautiful imagery. Nice job done.10.

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