Saturday, November 19, 2016

Dreams And Schemes Comments

Rating: 4.3

desire was just a turquoise sea
where golden stars would set me free

I blindly chased the fickle wind
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Barry Middleton
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Bill Cantrell 19 November 2016

Very nice wording throughout whole poem...love the desire with dreams, very nice!

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Barry Middleton 19 November 2016

Thank you very much. Glad you liked it. I cut an additional two couplets that I did not need.

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