Wednesday, December 4, 2013

Dreams And Reality Comments

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Would you please give me a place to hide?
Even my eyes are getting tired of being wet
I want them to be dried off.
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Morose Mermaid
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Khairul Ahsan 08 March 2014

An apt title and a stark note. In between, a soliloquy and some questions. Nice poem.

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Kanav Justa 05 December 2013

Loved the lines... ~ wana live so i walk alone And calling you in my lonliness ~ Nice poem....

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Gajanan Mishra 04 December 2013

be a human being, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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