Friday, September 11, 2009

Dreams And Reality Comments

Rating: 3.4

In the darkest hours of night
I can see a brilliant shining light
It eminates from the thoughts of you
Because you are so loyal and true
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jen capaldi
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Mary Louise Mann Gabumpa 11 November 2010

i love the way you testify things.. you make 'em a story... but its well understood of what you're talking about...

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Elna Mercado 29 March 2010

Jen, life is a series of test, sifting you to you finest when you learn from all your experiences. I'm not different form you, I have similar experiences. You well express and write what is inside. This is very important.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 October 2009

Never have a lover that fate won't steal Never a friend that will truely be real Everytime I think I find one it ends up in strife Because no one can be a part of my life.....never mind about dream and neaver about reality... it is HEwho decides the fate and not we. only optimism and positive thinking can yield best results and who know what is in store for us as we are all loved children of HIM and he may take care of everything..Leave that part to him...... it is so beautifully worded poem and i liked its every word....well dome..and i look forward more from you....10 read mine......love at first sight...mary to marry...miss i miss you.... o, lord/...prayer

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Shelly Shelly 10 October 2009

And my reality comes back to me That you and I can never be We can never be lovers Cuddling in bed under the covers You can never be a friend--- how sad the feelings are..simply a lost person who has lost a lot in this world can feel this..well its a general feeling again...but very strong..narrated the best way..10 again..

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Spiritwind Wood 30 September 2009

this is areally sad poem-i would've gave a 10-but it brought tears to my eyes

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 21 September 2009

At a transition point of dreams and reality, wageness and uncertainty of life is nicely expressed in this poem. Keep writing, Jen. Best Wishes

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Eyan Desir 21 September 2009

A sad poem but you wrote it sweet... Well expressed 10s

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Tamara - Hanaring 17 September 2009

a touching poem Jen, with warm needs, , beautifully written...just want to note that may be ten times i sign in till i posted this comment..let me try again as iam failed even with my new account to post this..i say that because you know the story...

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 16 September 2009

Wonderfully crafted. Keep writing!

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Luwi Habte 14 September 2009

the rythm is so great, and as a poem excited so nice luwi

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Emily Nobody 13 September 2009

its so sad but at the same time its so good

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Rakesh Bedi 12 September 2009

It expresses poet's pain in a very subtle manner. But, why dear, WHY? ? ? Hope sustains life. I dont think anyone should feel so low n desperate. Cheer up, friend, have FAITH in God n Yourself.

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