In the darkest hours of night
I can see a brilliant shining light
It eminates from the thoughts of you
Because you are so loyal and true
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Jen, life is a series of test, sifting you to you finest when you learn from all your experiences. I'm not different form you, I have similar experiences. You well express and write what is inside. This is very important.
Never have a lover that fate won't steal Never a friend that will truely be real Everytime I think I find one it ends up in strife Because no one can be a part of my life.....never mind about dream and neaver about reality... it is HEwho decides the fate and not we. only optimism and positive thinking can yield best results and who know what is in store for us as we are all loved children of HIM and he may take care of everything..Leave that part to him...... it is so beautifully worded poem and i liked its every word....well dome..and i look forward more from you....10 read mine......love at first sight...mary to marry...miss i miss you.... o, lord/...prayer
And my reality comes back to me That you and I can never be We can never be lovers Cuddling in bed under the covers You can never be a friend--- how sad the feelings are..simply a lost person who has lost a lot in this world can feel this..well its a general feeling again...but very strong..narrated the best way..10 again..
this is areally sad poem-i would've gave a 10-but it brought tears to my eyes
At a transition point of dreams and reality, wageness and uncertainty of life is nicely expressed in this poem. Keep writing, Jen. Best Wishes
a touching poem Jen, with warm needs, , beautifully written...just want to note that may be ten times i sign in till i posted this comment..let me try again as iam failed even with my new account to post this..i say that because you know the story...
It expresses poet's pain in a very subtle manner. But, why dear, WHY? ? ? Hope sustains life. I dont think anyone should feel so low n desperate. Cheer up, friend, have FAITH in God n Yourself.
i love the way you testify things.. you make 'em a story... but its well understood of what you're talking about...