Wednesday, October 17, 2012

Dreams Again Comments

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Is this real?
Your arms around my waist
Your breath in my ear
Your heart beat close to mine?
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Luna Black
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Diana Rose Tolentino 17 October 2012

Wondering if you miss me half as bad. I love this line and i know many could relate to it. It is realy sad to miss someone, but it is better to face the truth and get over it. Easier said than done, but that way it the first step of healing. We all have to create, A joyous or happy place. -I hope you don't mind if I add- Where we can find the true meaning of peace, Not the falsity brought by dreams. Thank you for sharing a wonderful poem. Keep up the good work..

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