Dreams Comments

Another stimulating ride through your world of Word Play. I feel like the poem has abandoned itself to the elements and the reader must abandon himself to the power of the Word artist! There are so many lines in this that I like but if you forced me to pick just one..... It flashes it's message in a dream state world of somnolent absurdities - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -but then again I take joy in this one............... Mixed into a witches caldron Bubbling, boiling bits of life Added in by the master of strife. Churned and turned, until crispy and tender through and through. .........................................................Yes! ! ! !